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Saturday, April 3, 2010

Your Writer's Voice: Step 8

Step 8: Now imagine that you look down and see that the crowd below has disappeared—except for your greatest enemy. He says, "I didn't hear you. Would you repeat that?"

Given one last sentence, addressing one's enemy, instead of an anonymous crowd, can inspire in different ways. You don't want to give your enemy the last word—to counter in a way that would pre-empt what you've said. Can you alter your sentence in a way that will make it enemy proof?

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